Title : Bedlam
Author : B A Morton
Genre : Crime/Horror
Blurb
Joe loves Kit. Everyone thinks
she’s dead. Joe knows she’s not.
If you lost the love of your
life, how far would you go to get them back?
Detective Joe McNeil would do
absolutely anything.
When Joe breathes life into a
crime scene victim, he discovers what anything
really means.
Nell will use whatever is
necessary to ensure she survives, including Joe. Is she really a victim or
merely the weapon being wielded by a much more cunning foe?
Against the background of a
multiple murder investigation, Joe struggles between his love for missing Kit
and his growing obsession with the enigmatic Nell. Plunged headlong into a
spiralling nightmare of kidnap, murder and betrayal, his relentless search for
the truth jeopardises his career, his sanity and his life.
But for Nell, the risk is even
greater..
A haunting tale of obsessive
love, ultimate sacrifice and deadly consequences
Author bio
Born in the North East of England,
B.A.Morton writes across a number of genres including crime, romance, horror
and historical fiction. After a twenty year civil service career, she and her
family escaped the rat race and relocated to the remote beauty of the
Northumberland National Park. She now works part time in the village GP surgery
and lives in a cottage built on the remains of a medieval crypt. Her debut
novel “Mrs Jones” a fast paced, romantic, crime thriller set in New York, was
runner up in the Yeovil Literary Prize 2011, published by Taylor Street
Publishing and closely followed by the sequel “Molly Brown”, and the first in a
medieval trilogy “Wildewood Revenge”. Her latest book “Bedlam” is a
psychological/horror/thriller.
The
Opening Scene – Excerpt One
I’m a pretty disorganised person. I write
when I can or when the mood grabs me and quite often that means I’m tip tapping
away at my teeny tiny keyboard, when every sane person is tucked up asleep in
bed. It’s the same with my novels. I start at the beginning and see where my
imagination takes me. It’s not for everyone, I know. In fact most people would
recommend a plan of sorts, a rough idea of start, middle and end, but my
thinking is this. In life we never know what awaits us, what quirks of fate,
decisions or accidents might change our course and it’s this unexpected quality
that makes life interesting, enjoyable and downright scary.
So I start with a thought, usually an
image or a snatch of conversation. Then I bring in the central characters and
let them loose. I like a twisty turny plot, I like the ending to be as much of
a surprise to me as it is to the reader. I love characters that are real and
make you laugh and cry. Sometimes it’s difficult to rein it all in, but goodness,
what fun!
But let’s not forget, that initial
thought. That first pen to paper has an awful lot riding on it. It has to
create a scene that grabs the reader’s attention and keeps them reading as the
plot unravels. The opening scene (and probably the closing scene), are the two
hardest things to write, but the first scene is the one that will hopefully win
the reader. For me, I go with my gut, the first image seared into my
imagination and I try very hard not deviate from that or to dilute it at the editing
stage.
Bedlam opens with a young woman poised precariously
on a windswept bridge parapet, two hundred feet above Bedlam’s open maw. She’s
raw with fear and emotion and she’s about to open the door to a horrifying
sequence of events that will push DS Joe McNeil to the brink of madness...
...I hope you’ll read the book to find out
why.
Excerpt
One:
Fear is
subjective. I know this to be true. In my time I have faced them all. The
scuttling arachnid, the hissing serpent, even the searing heat of the pyre has
left me unbowed. But, when I stand toe-to-toe with the wide open space, the
plummeting depths, the void at the edge of my world, the panoramic vista draws
me, seduces me, entices me to take that final step back into Bedlam.
I’m shaking now deep inside. My organs rattle like poppy seeds in a
desiccated pod. No warm flesh to cushion them, I am but a dry shell. Yet I feel
perspiration, cold against the back of my neck, hot on my face, and I force my
eyes to remain open. This time I must see what lies before me. This time
nothing will stop me.
I hear him coming softly through the darkness, his measured step as
he circles ever closer. I feel his presence. The subtle movement of air around
me as he moves disturbs my fragile being. I must retain focus, but I have not
the power to resist as his warm breath whispers against my ear, taunting,
teasing. He knows I will succumb, as I have for what seems like an eternity.
This time is different. I must overcome, I must succeed.
I inhale. The simple act of breathing causes my chest to burn. My
heart beats a warning, my senses buzz. I clamp my mouth shut, hold my breath.
He is all around me; he is poison - and yet my lungs yearn for release. My body
betrays me and my lips part with a soft sigh. The threat is real. I know it.
I cannot help myself. I step forward.
My toes are bare, scuffed and bloody, but I feel no pain, merely the
cold steel beneath my feet. I have travelled far. I am nearly there, almost at
my destination, the point of no return. Sadness seeps from my pores. Melancholy
hums gently in my head. I curl my toes over the edge, feel the roughness of
rusted rivets, and steady myself against the night breeze.
He smiles. I feel it against my skin in the same way I hear his
laughter in my head, harsh and mocking. He is letting me know that my actions
are his and I am powerless. I seek out the rage that lies hidden in the depths
of my used and abused excuse for a soul. It evades me.
I inch forward. Now my toes are free of the rusted metal and I pivot
precariously on the balls of my feet. Cool air, an updraft of sweet
intoxication beckons, and I am tempted. Behind, he urges me on, whispers his
jibes, like lyrics to a favourite song, over and over until the chorus
threatens to overpower me, to push me over, to pull me in.
Giveaway!
This giveaway is international
For a chance to win one of five mobi copies of Bedlam and one paperback copy of Bedlam
The winner will be announced at the end of the tour.
Further insight into what makes our Babs tick - apart from the Chocolate that is ....
ReplyDeleteHaha. True :)
DeleteI really enjoyed the excerpt!
ReplyDeleteGlad you did!!
DeleteI always enjoy hearing how different writers approach both the act of writing and the plotting (or not!) of a novel. It seems there are just about as many ways to do it as there are authors doing it! Just goes to show, you have to find what works for YOU.
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed the excerpt - it literally gave me goosebumps! And what lovely writing. I'm not quite sure how to explain what I liked so much about it... it's almost lyrical, maybe; very intelligent, but in a beautiful way, not clinical - if that makes sense! Thanks for the chance to win!
Im the same Holly. It fascinates me how each writer has their own way of doing things!
DeleteI agree as well about the excerpt. It really makes you want to read the book also the cover just grabs you too :)
The excerpt was very good, really looking forward to reading the rest of the book. Thank you for the giveaway.
ReplyDeleteYou are welcome and Im so glad you enjoyed the excerpt!
DeleteCrossing my fingers to win the paperback. Thanks so much for the chance!
ReplyDeleteDede
Id love the PB myself for my shelves ;) Best of luck in the giveaway.
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