Phantom Dreams
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FBI Special Agent Jack Matthews finds himself on yet another serial killer case, having barely recovered from the last disastrous hunt. Still stiff from a gun shot wound in his leg, under investigation for a botched job, and having lost his fiancée when she walked out on him, Jack is beginning to wonder if it isn’t time to move on to something new. But, for Jack, these cases are personal and he can’t say no.
Marketing specialist Kathy Gilliam leads a fairly boring life. If she’s not working or caring for her ailing father, then she is doing whatever it takes to avoid going anywhere near crowds of people. Her few distractions include her friend Margo Longfellow, occasional hiking trips, and her increasingly alarming dreams of women dying.
As her nightmares cause her to begin to doubt her sanity, the media releases news of the “Coast-to-Coast Killer” and Kathy discovers her dreams may be related. In a moment of panic, Kathy does something that places her on the FBI’s “persons of interest” list. Suddenly, her life is set on a collision course with Jack who must decide if Kathy is the killer or destined to become a victim.
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Beta Readers. Get Some.
Why You Need Them
and Where to Find Them
When I was writing short stories, I had a writer’s group
to rely on. We met twice a month, read
our stories aloud and received immediate feedback. It was great!
I sold ten stories, professionally, this way.
But that doesn’t
work as well for a novel. First off,
they are right when they say don’t let anyone read a novel you are currently
writing. You're either going to get
great feedback that will probably go to your head and make you lazy or you're
going to get so much constructive
criticism that you may become discouraged and give up. The only time you want to receive feedback
while writing that first draft is when you’re stuck and just need something to
pry you out of whatever corner you wrote yourself into.
Once
you’re done with that first draft, you put it away for a month or two, then
pull it back out and edit. And edit. And edit.
Its mind numbing. It may drive
you a little crazy. But it has to be
done. And it’s probably the hardest part
of the entire venture, next to marketing your baby. (But that’s another story.) But now, you need readers. Readers to help you find the holes in your
plot, or to tell you the places where your brilliant
novel becomes boring or confusing. But
also readers to tell you what you did right!
For those
of you who already have dedicated readers willing to wade through what is,
inevitably, a manuscript still in need of major repairs, good for you. I’ll try not to be jealous! For the rest of us, we know that no matter
how much our friends and family say they may help, getting them to finish, is
like pulling teeth. (Although I’ve never
pulled teeth, I hear it’s quite difficult.)
So where
do you find them? I tried book clubs,
college students, etc. No luck. But then
I decided to try something a little different.
I posted an ad on Craigslist. I
know you’re thinking “brilliant” right?
Or, more likely, “Are you crazy?
What if they steal your book?!”
Well, it’s a risk. And it didn’t
happen.
I
basically asked for 5-10 people to read my novel, answer a few questions, and
I’d send them a ten dollar Money Order.
The response was overwhelming. In
fact, I had to turn people away. For
those that responded, I outlined the questions, explained that once I got the
answers back, I’d send the money. And,
most importantly, I gave them a two week deadline. Once they agreed to all of this, I sent them
the book.
What I
got back blew me away. The comments
devastated and inspired me.
They
didn’t like my main character. She was
boring. (A result of writing late at night no doubt). They got confused in the beginning and at the
very end. They couldn’t put the book down in the middle. In fact, one lady said her interest was so
caught in the middle that she sat in her car outside of her gym, until she
finished it. (How cool is that?!)
I used
the comments to plug the holes. I rewrote and started the book with Jack,
instead of Kathy. And, when I became
discouraged, I read and re-read the comments that told me how much they liked
the book and would be willing to read it again once it was ready.
It was an
amazing experience that helped me make an OK story so much better. I will definitely be doing the same for my
next book! And I hope this was helpful!
T.K.
Harris
Biography
T.K. Harris was born in California and lived a gypsy sort of life traveling the world as a military brat. She has been writing since she was a child and as had several short stories published by various magazines, including one in Woman's World. She currently lives and works in Colorado as a Senior Solutions Architect and IT Instructor and has recently had her first novel, Phantom Dreams, published. She is looking forward to her next two books, already outlined and partially written.
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